The silence of the dark night sings to me the most melodious rhythm.....and my solitude offers a solace so elysian.Purple has begun to dictate my blues ...with this heart of mine seeking refuge in his beautiful mind...
Its no childhood fantasy...nor the usual reverie am speaking of today.For the convivial girl in me...it always seemed abstract and my idiosyncrasies never just let my heart get ruled.Many friendships lived....none I met ignited in me a passion so seraphic.Feelings i jeered at terming them quixotic had begun to speak.The inteligence i craved for....the assertiveness i pined for....the indomitable confidence he postured....and above all an understanding so strikingly terrific bridging all gaps seemed to juxtapose perfectly with d schmaltzy innocence in me.I had woken up to a new dawn.....embracing an emotion as fresh as the morning dew...his presence filling all voids....a prelude to a thinking so ''different'' in me....all woes deafened......desires rendered divine....
No promises to be kept.....no vows of fidelity to b shared......neither any lonely moment to cherish...... nor any fetters of commitment left unbroken...
11 comments:
writing it jus a gud job wud b an offence........but matchin ur work wid eulogies that is befittin ............seems to b a stupendous job.........class writtin.......awesome presentation........n romantic xpression of feelings......a blend of all depicted "with love..."
@salvwi
m honoured..thanks
Awesome piece i'd say...
"This laconic hypocrite in me acquisces the untrodden path to b taken with d most beautiful emotion......love.... in her heart forever......"
...very touching...
Great work indeed, Wt strikes u hard is her Impressive use of words, most of which v jus kno but never use... keep watchin this space..
Well... am speechless...
Actually, nothing needs to be said after the eclectic display of sheer sensuality in her expression...uh, well, i just did :p
anyways...just another word...
reading it was a never-before experience....
fantastic composition......but i had to look up thr dictionary quite a few times.real cool vocab lady....but is that ur original composition?????coz its too good.
very nearly the work of a virtuoso...
That was beautiful..hope your forever lasts that long :)
@all those who have given their comments
thanks
@ jagannath
more of wat...plz elaborate..wud love to write on nething dats captivating n expressive
good share, great article, very usefull for us...thank you
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