Wednesday, February 14, 2007

careless whisper...

For all those moments
of my cryptic silence...
frustration...
n a sense of indifference...
my breathlessness...
eccentricity...
anger...my unendurable moodiness
unreasonable solitude...
storming passions...tenacious foible
n the pegasus in me ....
BREWED wid
that caressing smile of yours...
a shoulder which I could always lean on...
an unassailable patience....
the care..the concern I craved for....
for that subtle presence...
and moments which I will cherish forever....
For being wat u were n what u are...for making me feel so elysian....
n for understanding me more n more n more.....
and today before u ask me...lemme tell u..
our friendship means to me one of the best assets I could ever wish or dream for ...
and acknowledge it isnt just friendship but a little bit more....

9 comments:

Salvwi Prasad said...

happy valentine's day....if love is the most beautiful event in one's life...then probably LORD has gifted u with the most creative heart to embellish it ....

Iris said...

@salvwi

Nothing better cud express my feelings than this :)

Finix said...
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Iris said...

@ finix

thanks for ur appreciation

Uttam Satapathy said...

They say love & friendship has always been divided by a thin red line. If friendship is, can love stand aloof? If love is, isn't friendship obvious? Your poem captures this philosophy in a most beautiful way...
Kudos, Mademoiselle.

xxayisjeeves said...

I have always loved the terse verse... and you've exploited it in a nice way... it feels great having come across your blog..

Anonymous said...

great philosophy.....

wildflower said...

u think friednship matures into love? may b it does for you. friendship is such a sweet relationship. and i associate love with fearing da person i love..hehe! may b coz i have also seen da darker shades of love also...lovely words...lovlier poem,looking forward to more

Anonymous said...

its a nice blogger....congrats..keep it up